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Birthday Gift: Mixedfan8643

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I know this is a few days late, but here's my birthday present for mixedfan8643.deviantart.com/

Hope you like it, and sorry for the delay...1st Emoticon: Happy Birthday 


(EDIT- 13/03/14  Changed the colours/Mandy's outfit)
Image size
1529x1737px 684.31 KB
Make
SAMSUNG
Model
GT-I9305
Shutter Speed
1/33 second
Aperture
F/2.6
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
160
Date Taken
Mar 12, 2014, 10:27:45 AM
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hi Mel, thanks for the birthday gift. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> Now time for my critique on it.

This is just wonderful. The poses, the hugging and kissing, how you drew Wilson and Mandy, what can I say? It's a lovely picture. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

I'm sorry to say that it's not perfect though. For starters, I don't really like the colouring of the picture. It looks...bland. I wish you made it more vibrant. And also you got Mandy's wardrobe wrong. Mandy wears a crop top and yet you drew her with a shirt that doesn't show off her belly.

Aside from that, I like this picture and thank you so much for drawing it for me. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>